I once believed

16Apr
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I was feeling very melancholy so I wrote a poem. It’s been a while since I wrote poetry so I thought I’d share. One of my tasks on my 101 in 1001 list is also to write a few poems, so I thought I’d give it a go.

A Tree (by caitysparkles)

I Once Believed

I once believed in fairy tales
Of sparkling lakes with talking whales
And magic, clams, and fish, and snails
But I believe no more

I once believed in queens and kings
And all those royal kinds of things
Songs of princesses I’d sing
But I believe no more

I once believed in leprechauns
Hippogriffs flew and mermaids sung
Phoenixes died and were reborn
But I believe no more

I once was young and I believed
Anything that could be conceived
But now that I’m a bit less naive
I wish I believed once more

15 comments on “I once believed

  1. I started writing a poem very similar to that a few years ago. Yours is a lot better.

  2. I used to write poetry all the time, I have a whole notebook filled with them! I love this one :)

  3. Caity,
    I hear you…
    May you find peace in your heart and may joy surround you.
    I still wholeheartedly believe..there are moments I am hurt and wish I *didn’t* believe, but I do…Magic is real…the morning dewdrops and night-time moonbeams tell me so….

  4. Stephanie

    Hey Caity, I’m a long time lurker. I personally think you’re adorable, and I’m sorry you’re feeling down. The poem is lovely.

  5. This is a lovely lovely poem. I look forward to sharing it with my daughter; we both believe in fairies!

  6. Wow, I love your poem:) It is really nice, and a very good point:)

  7. I am not a big fan of poetry at all but I REALLY liked that poem. I feel the same way at times!

  8. Thank you! :)

    I love the photo, and the poem. It really gives me this nostalgic feeling and I sort of feel a look into the past, especially with the mention of naivety.

    I really love poetry! My friend challenged herself to write one every day; I think that I might try that but sometimes I might not be able to post every day. :P

  9. Wow, I liked that A LOT. I’m not usually a poetry girl but this one was pretty great.

  10. I love poems and I think yours is very nice :]

  11. That’s such a lovely poem! <3 I've never been a poem kind of gal and I envy girls who can write poetry, and write it well.

    *huggles* Chin up, you're amazing!

  12. I love love love the poem!!! Good job!

  13. Wonderful poem!

  14. Great job! I’ve always wished I was better at writing poems etc.

  15. Yummy looking! Love it!

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